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[jdmklein]

i've realized my problem. i've focused this whole story on the boy. i wanted it to be about the girl. i think i'm going to continue writing to the very last minute, now. i probably won't get the minimum number of words required, but it is always easier to go back and revise than to stop and try to recreate in a differentvein. It's still not going where i want it, but at least now i know why.